Thursday, May 22, 2008

Advising Meeting Thursday, May 22, 2008

Goals:
1. Review revised body paragraphs (those selected by Dani to be problematic)
2. Review re-placement of several paragraphs to earlier in paper
3. REVIEW REVISED CONCLUSION!!!

Accomplished:
1. Conclusion edited on paper and in person
2. Determined a new section to be created: "Limitations of Research" to separate first paragraph from the conclusion
3. highlighted key sentences to be elaborated on or stressed in conclusion

To Do Next Mtg
Look at thesis and make sure it matches perfectly with the conclusion paragraphs (reviewing revisions)